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It doesn't look bad.

However the stock images used on the home page have a low resolution and look alite grainy.

The subtext doesn't stand out as much in front of these pictures.

I would fix these things
 
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It doesn't look bad.

However the stock images used on the home page have a low resolution and look alite grainy.

The subtext doesn't stand out as much in front of these pictures.

I would fix these things
Thanks man, the images and text is not something i am in charge of
 

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looks cool, if you're not responsible of the images then you've done a good job
 
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looks cool, if you're not responsible of the images then you've done a good job
Thank you man! Appreciate the feedback
 
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Not sure if you are working with a website builder or you coded yourself. I'd say remove the YouTube player controls for people on the site it seems a bit tacky. The video's first frame looks a bit low quality not sure if that was just on my end. For "The Forest Ferns" and "The Beauty Of The Night Sky" section the white text doesn't contrast well with the background image. You can try adding a black/darker overlay over the images to help it or change images. Other than that the website design is nice simple and elegant to look at. Good job!
 
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It’s alright imo
 
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Not sure if you are working with a website builder or you coded yourself. I'd say remove the YouTube player controls for people on the site it seems a bit tacky. The video's first frame looks a bit low quality not sure if that was just on my end. For "The Forest Ferns" and "The Beauty Of The Night Sky" section the white text doesn't contrast well with the background image. You can try adding a black/darker overlay over the images to help it or change images. Other than that the website design is nice simple and elegant to look at. Good job!
Thank you, this is made on Shopify so there are limitations to what i am able to make within the price range of the client
 

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Pros:
Resolution support,
Colors palette is very clean
Font is good but it's pixelated,
Cons (Most of this are fixable but also most of them are Shopify issues:
Low res stock images,
Like I said font is pixelated but you said you do it on Shopify so I don't really blame you for the cons,
Youtube player when you click on the play icon (You can just put youtube instead of clicking the same button twice to play a video),
The font color doesn't go well with the background it's hard to read,
Instead of "Subscribe to our emails" you can put "Subscribe to our newletter" since it's simpler and makes more sense.
It's really good and I couldn't make a site so I'll probably hit you up if I want a site or etc. :)
Good luck with the clients <3
 

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It's not a bad start needs some improvements like the white text on the images can barely read them. Maybe an outline or something
 
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