I need rating and suggestions for my first animated signature art.

[north]

Hello, I recently joined this conmunity and wanted to start making animated signatures, avatars and other..
This is my first signature which I did for my friend @yz, he said it’s good but I think I can do better with more
behance

 

[north]

Yeah it's probably bad since nobody is commenting

 

[coju]

lemme be the first comment, I seen this on ogu b4, I would try to do different fonts and try to add more characters (small characters).

 

[north]

lemme be the first comment, I seen this on ogu b4, I would try to do different fonts and try to add more characters (small characters).

Oh yeah, I didn’t update this and on yhe ogu but i kinda trying out new things hehe thank you tho

 

[seller]

would give it a 5/10. i'd change the font since it's barely readable at distance. have you tried the transparent background if it's possible? looks kinda empty with black background and 2 same character models.

 

[north]

would give it a 5/10. i'd change the font since it's barely readable at distance. have you tried the transparent background if it's possible? looks kinda empty with black background and 2 same character models.

I did but I really can't due to render issues, so I improvise by doing a background color same as the site

 

[asia]

Yeah it's probably bad since nobody is commenting

LMAO the emojis are too funny

 

[north]

LMAO the emojis are too funny

for real

 

[GOD]

not bad bat it can be improved. imho the animation is too quick and the font should be changed.
I really like your current signature, it has a good font and the animation has the right duration.

 

[Boxxy]

Shit goes pretty crazy.